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Yellow Clouds

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This night I walked across a cobbled path. Sock feet sinking into moss protruding from the cracks.
Beautiful destruction.
Walking in midnight air I stared at the stars and saw the madness of Van Gogh painted in the yellow clouds.
Inspired from a cloudly night on a full moon, where yellow clouds blotted out the light. This was right before a storm and incredibly beautiful to see on an empty night. It led to all kinds of mad thinking! :D

Written by Lucy Stallions and property of.

For the Written Revolution Submission there is a critique here <[link]>

Questions, Questions:
Is it too vague?
Can you invision the scene?
Is the theme too overdone?
Any more constructive comments would be much appreciated. :)
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InTheStarryNightSky's avatar
A beautiful piece. Wonderful job.

:giggle: And fits my icon.