I owe this to everyone out there who has a best friend they can count on and I dedicate it to you!
Please tell me what you think constructive critism is always appreciated! I want to improve so tell me what is wrong, grammar, spelling, tone, construction, theme, organization, etc. I need and want to know!
This is just something I felt passionate about writing.
Previous Critique for #WrittenRevolution: <[link]
-Was it confusing?
-Does the construction of the piece flow evenly?
-Does it have a definite descriptive tone that helps you picture what's happening in the narrator's mind? Or is it more of a hazy theme and lots of angry words?
-Does the piece voke any emotions from you? If so what?